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Interesting.

I can't say that I chuckled to myself; although the voice-synch is well done, the pictures created negative effect. They appeared lazily plopped in for the waffle/pancake/french toast thing. Maybe if you made some waffles/pancakes/french toast and used them in the video, It'd do better.

Superior

At the time of this writing, this animation has a score of 4.42. It fully deserves every point. The animation style is flawless and contributes well to the theme. And yes, the music flowed excellently with the animation, contributing to the theme and the sadness of the animation. There is nothing I can ask you to improve upon, congratulations!

LTD

Deep

That was deep, man. You've got some talent in animation. I can't really think of anything you could improve on; you played on the aspects that I know of perfectly, especially emotion.

Decent

Not as zesty as the first Phoenix Wrongs (they've been going on for how long now?), but the music theme is different, so that's good. The one Judge part seemed out of place, being spoken. Also, might want to move up the credits in the timeline so that it doesn't seem like a few seconds...or are your credits all one object? If so, you might want to just separate them out so Flash only loads small files rather than one large file. I had thought that the window froze, then I saw credits.

So yeah. Not too original in terms of graphics, with the exception of the first bit with the air guitar.

Overall, pretty decent!

lTd
"1+1=2"

Zachary responds:

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BNW...

Alright, so I've read BNW, so let's see how this flash stacks up...

Alright, the Model T building...the babies before birth...and stops abruptly. I give it a fail, but only because it's unfinished.

Homey and good

I feel warm inside.

Good job. I don't normally watch Clock animations, but I'm glad that I watched this one. Might have to start watching y'all.

Happy Holidays!

LTD
"I got a Wiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!"

ButtplugClock responds:

Thank you. If I can get even one person to watch more clock movies, this was a success. Happy Holidays!

Hehe, good job.

That was a pretty good movie. The sprites were run smoothly, so good style. The sound was a little grating towards the end, but it fit the theme well (lo-res). Congrats, hope it passes!

LTD
"I got the Wiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!"
Oh, and happy Christmas!

Amegada responds:

Cheers, mate! Happy Crimbo to you too.

Pretty nice

Me liketh. A tad jerky during some of the animation (just the transisions), but the music fit the setting very nicely, and the graphics were well done. Good job!

LTD
"I am a racing car!"

Eh, needs work.

Alright, it could use some work. Interesting idea, but everything happens so slow. Like the effect of the speech though. Just make the action happen faster, maybe add some stuff, and work on graphics. Graphics, graphics, graphics.

LTD

Cinnabonmon responds:

Thank you i appreciate your feedback.

Excellent job

I thoroughly enjoyed this music video. The visuals fit very well with the music, and its upbeat formula is quite effective. How to improve? I'd work on concentrating on the two characters. Otherwise, excellent job, and I look forward to more animations and videos!

LTD

Valerie, you make me wish I was dead

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