lunaTredecim's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Meeting Snorlax]

Good drawing, decent animation, just needs sound.

Just as an idea, you don't need to have a microphone do the speaking. After all, most voice-actors are done poorly, and in all honesty, 14-year-olds don't make good voice actors. I'd add some Pokemon music, keep it light, and a few sound effects when necessary.

Not bad though!

[Dance your Pants!]

I like it

Music, 10/10. Maybe it's just because I wrote it, but heh.

I like the way you made it random though. Didn't exactly sync up, but again, it was random, it was close, and it was humorous.

[Christmas e-card]

You're right

It's not the snazziest thing out there.

BUT

It's pretty decent, especially for a first shot at Flash. My main criticism: speed up the frame rate, probably to 24. Otherwise, I liked it!

[Starfish]

Simple, but nice

It's a rather good flash and story. I enjoyed the original story myself, but you did a very nice job retelling it. Music cuts off a little early at the end, a bit abrupt, but otherwise, very nice.

Nami-Oki responds:

Thank you. For some reason the animation runs fine on my computer, I wonder if that's a browser problem? But anyways, thanks a lot for reviewing!

[Lemon Demon's "Bad Idea"]

Excellent!

Andrew, you're an amazing animator. I have nothing to suggest. I've enjoyed these Lemon Demon music videos immensely!

[How to Be Cool]

Alright...

9th grade, eh? Not bad at all. Make sure to stop any sounds upon moving to each frame so that the sounds don't overlap.

[:the Composer:]

I'm speechless.

This is the best animation that I have ever seen, and have no critiques that I can give. A quintessential animation!

[I Got Him]

Not too bad

Alright, firstly, I suggest a stop-play button set.
Secondly, good job on the fbf. It's not the smoothest I've seen, but it's pretty good. Also, good job on perspective for the bullet firing.

[B-A-N-A-N-A Tutorial1]

What the...

Why am I surprised? Author comments that have nothing to do with the flash, the flash intro is a ripoff of the old Kitty Krew intro, poor "animation"...first, get lessons in Flash. Second, don't mislead people in the author comment. Third, get a life.

Graphics [1/10]
There were graphics.

Purpose [0/10]
No real purpose whatsoever.

And yet, the sad thing is that I will be denied my blam point because your chums will vote high.

brushclock responds:

Then you should'nt vote...FAG