lunaTredecim's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Achievement Unlocked]

319 seconds

...of really good fun! Clever idea!

[3D Bernie [High qaulity]]

Bad.

A few tweens does not make an animation. Interactive? Sure, but it's really poorly done. Maybe be able to go between graphics? Also, people like it if you draw it without tracing. Try using your own style.

bernie-buddy responds:

Poorly done? WHY DO YOU THINK IT'S POORLY DONE?!?!!??!?!!??!?!?! IT'S AWESOMELY DONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT'S NOT POORLY MADE ONE BIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DX<

[Tutorial:Password Protect]

No.

This may work, it may not. I can't tell. I can't read it, and I'm not going to try and decipher the blue/red when I can find a better tutorial online.

[! Music Mania !]

Good job!

I'm also creating a flash for the Rock Out contest, but I know it's not going to be half as good as this entry. Just the simplicity of it was amazing, yet it was difficult enough to pose a challenge. Also very smooth framework. Congratulations! I can't think of any way to improve it offhand.

lTD

[StarShine]

Best game of the year

So far, this is the best game that I've seen so far this year. Very nice choice of music, very good game concept. I can tell that quite a bit of time went into designing this. Simple concept, difficult permutations. Overall, good job!

lTd

[Riddle School 2]

Well done

Not too many complaints that I can have about this game. Perhaps work on different music (and disable tabbing :p), but aside from that, this is one of the better games that I've seen on the site as of late. Good job!

LTD

JonBro responds:

I can't find music that everyone enjoys...
and how do you disable tabbing?

Thanks for the review!

[Word Games]

Not bad.

Not bad, a few things to work out, such as the god-annoying music. However, it certainly was entertaining to see Dave Barry the pixie carrying a loaded stave and stealing tater tots.

Naois responds:

Dude, you have an interesting mind. I like your sense of humor. Thanks for the review.

[Defend your Portal!]

Meh, it's bloken.

It breaks after 760...no more came flying...meh.
So, it still needs work, but it's passable for now.

[Weasel Invasion (Demo)]

Eh, it can stay.

The instructions were hard to read (reload the flash with the new colours). Otherwise, it was pretty decent. It's good enough in my opinion to stay :)

[U-TWIIN Ch1 Act2]

Mehish.

Alright, it was very well done as a flash animation...but the comic itself wasn't very humorous. If you keep that style of animation though, that should be pretty good.