lunaTredecim's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Starfish]

Simple, but nice

It's a rather good flash and story. I enjoyed the original story myself, but you did a very nice job retelling it. Music cuts off a little early at the end, a bit abrupt, but otherwise, very nice.

Nami-Oki responds:

Thank you. For some reason the animation runs fine on my computer, I wonder if that's a browser problem? But anyways, thanks a lot for reviewing!

[B-A-N-A-N-A Tutorial1]

What the...

Why am I surprised? Author comments that have nothing to do with the flash, the flash intro is a ripoff of the old Kitty Krew intro, poor "animation"...first, get lessons in Flash. Second, don't mislead people in the author comment. Third, get a life.

Graphics [1/10]
There were graphics.

Purpose [0/10]
No real purpose whatsoever.

And yet, the sad thing is that I will be denied my blam point because your chums will vote high.

brushclock responds:

Then you should'nt vote...FAG

[Phoenix Wrong: <3 Music]

Decent

Not as zesty as the first Phoenix Wrongs (they've been going on for how long now?), but the music theme is different, so that's good. The one Judge part seemed out of place, being spoken. Also, might want to move up the credits in the timeline so that it doesn't seem like a few seconds...or are your credits all one object? If so, you might want to just separate them out so Flash only loads small files rather than one large file. I had thought that the window froze, then I saw credits.

So yeah. Not too original in terms of graphics, with the exception of the first bit with the air guitar.

Overall, pretty decent!

lTd
"1+1=2"

Zachary responds:

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["Happy Holidays"]

Homey and good

I feel warm inside.

Good job. I don't normally watch Clock animations, but I'm glad that I watched this one. Might have to start watching y'all.

Happy Holidays!

LTD
"I got a Wiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!"

ButtplugClock responds:

Thank you. If I can get even one person to watch more clock movies, this was a success. Happy Holidays!

[A Mushroom Coated X-Mas]

Hehe, good job.

That was a pretty good movie. The sprites were run smoothly, so good style. The sound was a little grating towards the end, but it fit the theme well (lo-res). Congrats, hope it passes!

LTD
"I got the Wiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!"
Oh, and happy Christmas!

Amegada responds:

Cheers, mate! Happy Crimbo to you too.

[Peep Mishaps]

Eh, needs work.

Alright, it could use some work. Interesting idea, but everything happens so slow. Like the effect of the speech though. Just make the action happen faster, maybe add some stuff, and work on graphics. Graphics, graphics, graphics.

LTD

Cinnabonmon responds:

Thank you i appreciate your feedback.

[CLOCKS FUCKING SUCK]

Ew.

Then stop watching the movies. Don't submit stuff like this; it only adds space on the server. Post it on a board if you want to, but I am honestly surprised that this passed. No real animation (AKA, I could do that), no opinion, etc.

ConradB responds:

SMARTY GUY SLIKRIK SAYZ:

OH NOEZ NEWGRUNDS BADNWITHH SI BEIGN TAEKN AWAY PZL TOM FLUP DODN'T HURT ME!!

[Raindrop song]

I think I see the problem.

Alright, did you set the music to stream? If not, that's why it's out of sync. Pretty nice though, good job. Better than others I've seen :)

Raicc responds:

...no I sure didn't set it to stream.. :P oops.. I'll fix that right away..

[Expr. Film Collab:my part]

Hrm. Not bad.

It wasn't that bad, but if other people don't finish up, then you ARE allowed to finish it. Although, I do admit that I did enjoy this sampler. Finish it now :)

-ltd

Chea responds:

:] I guess i could animate to the rest of the song but i'm too busy ;o;

[Ku Klux Karl Episode 1]

Sad

I'm afraid that I must vote low on this entry. While it is true that your third animation has much better graphics than my fifth animation, the topic that you have chosen is far from acceptable in society. Racism is not a subject to be taken lightly, because there are some people who would look at this animation and join the Ku Klux Klan for these reasons. If you had chosen a better topic, even if it was much stranger (toast vs poptarts for example), it would have performed much better.

LilGuido responds:

LOL, you must be joking. i dont even know why im responding to this, other than i laughed my ass off when i read this. join the kkk from watching a movie of him telling really bad jokes and gettin his ass kick*spolier*. i mean come on dude. did you read what you wrote? some of you need to be a lil more open.