Just as an idea, you don't need to have a microphone do the speaking. After all, most voice-actors are done poorly, and in all honesty, 14-year-olds don't make good voice actors. I'd add some Pokemon music, keep it light, and a few sound effects when necessary.
A few tweens does not make an animation. Interactive? Sure, but it's really poorly done. Maybe be able to go between graphics? Also, people like it if you draw it without tracing. Try using your own style.
Poorly done? WHY DO YOU THINK IT'S POORLY DONE?!?!!??!?!!??!?!?! IT'S AWESOMELY DONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT'S NOT POORLY MADE ONE BIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DX<
It's a rather good flash and story. I enjoyed the original story myself, but you did a very nice job retelling it. Music cuts off a little early at the end, a bit abrupt, but otherwise, very nice.
I quite enjoyed watching that movie. I was thinking at first that it would be cool if the screamo guy could be synched, then realized it was funnier this way. So, excellent job!
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All 63 flash Reviews
Rated 5 / 5 stars January 28, 2009
319 seconds
...of really good fun! Clever idea!
Rated 3 / 5 stars August 1, 2008
Good drawing, decent animation, just needs sound.
Just as an idea, you don't need to have a microphone do the speaking. After all, most voice-actors are done poorly, and in all honesty, 14-year-olds don't make good voice actors. I'd add some Pokemon music, keep it light, and a few sound effects when necessary.
Not bad though!
Rated 2.5 / 5 stars June 30, 2008
It's...
...interesting, to say the least. The music is what really made it, though.
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars February 14, 2008
I like it
Music, 10/10. Maybe it's just because I wrote it, but heh.
I like the way you made it random though. Didn't exactly sync up, but again, it was random, it was close, and it was humorous.
Rated 3 / 5 stars December 3, 2007
You're right
It's not the snazziest thing out there.
BUT
It's pretty decent, especially for a first shot at Flash. My main criticism: speed up the frame rate, probably to 24. Otherwise, I liked it!
Rated 0 / 5 stars December 3, 2007
Bad.
A few tweens does not make an animation. Interactive? Sure, but it's really poorly done. Maybe be able to go between graphics? Also, people like it if you draw it without tracing. Try using your own style.
Poorly done? WHY DO YOU THINK IT'S POORLY DONE?!?!!??!?!!??!?!?! IT'S AWESOMELY DONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT'S NOT POORLY MADE ONE BIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DX<
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars December 1, 2007
Simple, but nice
It's a rather good flash and story. I enjoyed the original story myself, but you did a very nice job retelling it. Music cuts off a little early at the end, a bit abrupt, but otherwise, very nice.
Thank you. For some reason the animation runs fine on my computer, I wonder if that's a browser problem? But anyways, thanks a lot for reviewing!
Rated 5 / 5 stars October 31, 2007
Excellent!
Andrew, you're an amazing animator. I have nothing to suggest. I've enjoyed these Lemon Demon music videos immensely!
Rated 2 / 5 stars October 18, 2007
Alright...
9th grade, eh? Not bad at all. Make sure to stop any sounds upon moving to each frame so that the sounds don't overlap.
Rated 4.5 / 5 stars October 13, 2007
Liked it a lot
I quite enjoyed watching that movie. I was thinking at first that it would be cool if the screamo guy could be synched, then realized it was funnier this way. So, excellent job!